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Sarah Dredge's avatar

This was so interesting Bethany. I was showing it to my son who sketches comics and creates characters... some of which evolve over time. It was a great example for him.

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Reagan Dregge's avatar

The evolving names - myrlaex, welkin, glider - remind me of Tolkien's multiple names (hobbit, holbytla, halfling). Perhaps you were settling into the culture from which you wanted to tell this story, and those early names were other cultures' names, strange to us because we do not know the language?

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